Last Call Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-13
review-ietf-opsawg-mud-13-secdir-lc-montville-2017-10-28-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-opsawg-mud |
|---|---|---|
| Requested rev. | no specific revision (document currently at 25) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | Security Area Directorate (secdir) | |
| Deadline | 2017-11-07 | |
| Requested | 2017-10-24 | |
| Authors | Eliot Lear, Ralph Droms, Dan Romascanu | |
| Draft last updated | 2017-10-28 | |
| Completed reviews |
Secdir Early review of -08 by Adam Montville
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Genart Early review of -08 by Robert Sparks (diff) Iotdir Early review of -08 by Henk Birkholz (diff) Yangdoctors Early review of -08 by Martin Björklund (diff) Rtgdir Last Call review of -13 by Adrian Farrel (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -13 by Adam Montville (diff) Genart Telechat review of -20 by Robert Sparks (diff) Opsdir Telechat review of -20 by Scott Bradner (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Adam Montville |
| State | Completed | |
| Review | review-ietf-opsawg-mud-13-secdir-lc-montville-2017-10-28 | |
| Reviewed rev. | 13 (document currently at 25) | |
| Review result | Ready | |
| Review completed: | 2017-10-28 |
Review
review-ietf-opsawg-mud-13-secdir-lc-montville-2017-10-28
I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. The draft is ready. All previously identified potential issues (see [1]) seem to have been addressed. For the security ADs, please review the summary I wrote at [1], which is still applicable. For the opsawg folks, if (when?) you get around to describing how software packages might be able to convey their intended use and/or preferred configuration, let me know - I'd like to help. [1] https://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/current/msg07563.html