Last Call Review of draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-27
review-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-27-opsdir-lc-zhou-2018-02-27-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 33)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2018-02-26
Requested 2018-02-12
Authors Ari Keränen, Jan Melen, Miika Komu
Draft last updated 2018-02-27
Completed reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -27 by Tianran Zhou (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -27 by Colin Perkins (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -27 by Roni Even (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -28 by Carl Wallace (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -28 by Roni Even (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -30 by Carl Wallace (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Tianran Zhou 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-27-opsdir-lc-zhou-2018-02-27
Reviewed rev. 27 (document currently at 33)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2018-02-27

Review
review-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-27-opsdir-lc-zhou-2018-02-27

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

I did not see any special operational or network management related issue. This document is clear to me and is ready for publication.

Cheers,
Tianran