Telechat Review of draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-28

Request Review of draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 33)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-05-08
Requested 2018-03-21
Authors Ari Keränen, Jan Melen, Miika Komu
Draft last updated 2018-04-08
Completed reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -27 by Tianran Zhou (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -27 by Colin Perkins (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -27 by Roni Even (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -28 by Carl Wallace (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -28 by Roni Even (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -30 by Carl Wallace (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Roni Even 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-28-genart-telechat-even-2018-04-08
Reviewed rev. 28 (document currently at 33)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2018-04-08


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Document: draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2018-04-08
IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-26
IESG Telechat date: 2018-05-10

The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC with one nit.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments: 

In section 7 - "a new error type  SERVER_REFLEXIVE_CANDIDATE_ALLOCATION_FAILED in Section 5.9." It is in section 5.10