Last Call Review of draft-ietf-bess-dci-evpn-overlay-08
review-ietf-bess-dci-evpn-overlay-08-genart-lc-gurbani-2018-02-15-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-bess-dci-evpn-overlay
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-02-09
Requested 2018-01-26
Draft last updated 2018-02-15
Completed reviews Rtgdir Telechat review of -08 by Sasha Vainshtein (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -08 by Victor Kuarsingh (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Tero Kivinen (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -08 by Vijay Gurbani (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Vijay Gurbani
State Completed
Review review-ietf-bess-dci-evpn-overlay-08-genart-lc-gurbani-2018-02-15
Reviewed rev. 08 (document currently at 10)
Review result Ready with Issues
Review completed: 2018-02-15

Review
review-ietf-bess-dci-evpn-overlay-08-genart-lc-gurbani-2018-02-15

Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-overlay-??
Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani
Review Date: 2017-12-21
IETF LC End Date: 2017-12-22
IESG Telechat date: 2018-01-11

Summary: The draft is ready as a PS.  It has one Minor issue that needs some
discussion.

Major issues: None.

Minor issues: One.

Nits/editorial comments:  None.

Minor issues:
In S13 (IANA Considerations), I am not sure whether this draft is allocating
the tunnel types or not.  The responsible IANA registry [0] shows that the
tunnel types mentioned in this draft are already allocated through a precursor
individual draft [1], which has long expired.  However, when I look at the IANA
Consideration section in [1], it is empty!  So I am not sure how the IANA
registry in [0] received the allocations.  I think the IANA section of this
draft needs to be updated accordingly.

[0]
https://www.iana.org/assignments/bgp-parameters/bgp-parameters.xhtml#tunnel-types
[1] http://www.iana.org/go/draft-sd-l2vpn-evpn-overlay (the expired individual
draft itself is at https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-sd-l2vpn-evpn-overlay-03)