Last Call Review of draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-p2mp-12

Request Review of draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-p2mp
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 13)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2019-03-20
Requested 2019-03-06
Other Reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -10 by Andrew Malis (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -12 by Donald Eastlake (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer David Schinazi
Review review-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-p2mp-12-genart-lc-schinazi-2019-03-12
Posted at
Reviewed rev. 12 (document currently at 13)
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2019-03-12
Review completed: 2019-03-12


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Document: draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-p2mp-12
Reviewer: David Schinazi
Review Date: 2019-03-12
IETF LC End Date: 2019-03-20
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: I am not knowledgeable in this domain so this review
only focused on style. Document reads nicely, is well ordered
and defines its terminology clearly. Looks great from a form perspective.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: None