Telechat Review of draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5750-bis-06
review-ietf-lamps-rfc5750-bis-06-genart-telechat-robles-2018-06-14-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5750-bis
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-06-19
Requested 2018-05-29
Other Reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by √Čric Vyncke (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -05 by Ines Robles (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Matthew Miller (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Ines Robles
Review review-ietf-lamps-rfc5750-bis-06-genart-telechat-robles-2018-06-14
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/h_6ryChAyoUq_ovQOaDtIkntXOg
Reviewed rev. 06 (document currently at 08)
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2018-06-14
Review completed: 2018-06-14

Review
review-ietf-lamps-rfc5750-bis-06-genart-telechat-robles-2018-06-14

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Document: draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5750-bis-??
Reviewer: Ines Robles
Review Date: 2018-06-14
IETF LC End Date: 2018-04-27
IESG Telechat date: 2018-06-21

Summary:

This document specifies conventions for X.509 certificate usage by Secure/Multipurpose Internet Mail Extensions (S/MIME) v4.0 agents.
This document obsoletes RFC 5750.

I believe the draft is technically good. This document is well written and clear to understand.
The minor issues of version 05 were addressed in version 06.

Major issues: No major issues found.

Minor issues: No minor issues found.

Nits/editorial comments:  idnits tool shows: 4 errors (**), 0 flaws (~~), 7 warnings (==), 12 comments (--). 
https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits?url=https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5750-bis-06.txt

Thanks!

Ines.