Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dime-rfc4006bis-07
review-ietf-dime-rfc4006bis-07-genart-lc-dunbar-2018-05-03-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dime-rfc4006bis
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-04-12
Requested 2018-03-29
Other Reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -07 by Joel Jaeggli (diff)
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Review State Completed
Reviewer Linda Dunbar
Review review-ietf-dime-rfc4006bis-07-genart-lc-dunbar-2018-05-03
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/aNqFhBIYHWh9_md1AcnQV5q66_M
Reviewed rev. 07 (document currently at 08)
Review result Almost Ready
Draft last updated 2018-05-03
Review completed: 2018-05-03

Review
review-ietf-dime-rfc4006bis-07-genart-lc-dunbar-2018-05-03

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Document: draft-ietf-dime-rfc4006bis-07
Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review Date: 2018-05-03
IETF LC End Date: 2018-04-12
IESG Telechat date: 2018-05-24

Summary:
The document is well written for the part describing how end-users/CC-client request services from Credit Control server. 

Is it mandatory to use the Section 4 provided mechanism for Rating Input to the Credit Control? Can the Credit Control get credit rating from offline process (manual, offline, etc)? 


Major issues: None

Minor issues: Is Section 4 mechanism mandatory? 

Nits/editorial comments: 

Regards, Linda Dunbar