Telechat Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-microwave-framework-05
review-ietf-ccamp-microwave-framework-05-genart-telechat-dunbar-2018-05-13-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-microwave-framework
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-05-22
Requested 2018-04-06
Other Reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -04 by Loa Andersson (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Tianran Zhou (diff)
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Review State Completed
Reviewer Linda Dunbar
Review review-ietf-ccamp-microwave-framework-05-genart-telechat-dunbar-2018-05-13
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/Wmc_kVNN2dPfDjL9Cnfb7f9k40I
Reviewed rev. 05 (document currently at 07)
Review result Ready with Issues
Draft last updated 2018-05-13
Review completed: 2018-05-13

Review
review-ietf-ccamp-microwave-framework-05-genart-telechat-dunbar-2018-05-13

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Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-microwave-framework-05
Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review Date: 2018-05-13
IETF LC End Date: 2018-04-20
IESG Telechat date: 2018-05-24

Summary:

IETF LC End Date: N/A
IESG Telechat date: 2018-05-

Summary:  with a potential issue.

Page11, Section 4.5: 
Missing signal degradation or partial fault management. Radio link is heavily impacted by weather. Rain/cloud can make a radio link lose up to 50% of its capacity. Therefore, it will be quite useful to report the effective bandwidth of the radio link.

Some questions: 

Page 6: Can one Radio Link be shared by multiple Carrier Terminations?  If yes, are those multiple Carrier Terminations terminated at one physical device?

Page 7: do you mean “key goal or key purpose of this work” in the following sentence? 
“The adoption of an SDN framework for management and control the microwave interface is one of the key applications for this work.”

Page 10, Section 4.1.2: What does “over the hop” mean in the first sentence? Isn’t it same as “… establish L1 connectivity to an associated radio link…”?

Major issues:  N/A

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments: 

Best Regards, Linda Dunbar