Last Call Review of draft-faltstrom-unicode11-07
review-faltstrom-unicode11-07-genart-lc-romascanu-2019-02-26-00

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Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2019-03-05
Requested 2019-02-05
Other Reviews I18ndir Last Call review of -07 by Harald Alvestrand (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Samuel Weiler
Genart Telechat review of -08 by Dan Romascanu
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Reviewer Dan Romascanu
Review review-faltstrom-unicode11-07-genart-lc-romascanu-2019-02-26
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/V4OeAXARa8dgkzFOnCJTPYIR5bc
Reviewed rev. 07 (document currently at 08)
Review result Ready with Issues
Draft last updated 2019-02-26
Review completed: 2019-02-26

Review
review-faltstrom-unicode11-07-genart-lc-romascanu-2019-02-26

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Document: draft-faltstrom-unicode11-07
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
Review Date: 2019-02-26
IETF LC End Date: 2019-03-05
IESG Telechat date: 2019-03-07

Summary:

This document describes changes to synchronize IDNA2008 and Unicode 11.0.0 and makes recommendations for the DNS registries on this respect.

The document is READY with the exception of one issue that needs clarification concerning the IANA actions. 

Major issues:

Minor issues:

The IANA Considerations text is not clear to me. 

> IANA is requested to update the IDNA Parameters registry of derived
   property values, after the expert reviewer validates that the derived
   property values are calculated correctly.

What does this exactly say? Are these recommendations for future actions, or do they refer specifically to property values described in this document? Are the expert reviewer validation and IDNA Parameters registry update required to be performed prior to approval of this document? 

Nits/editorial comments: 

1. in Abstract s/recomments/recommends

2. in Introduction s/follows0/follows