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Request Review of draft-sprecher-mpls-tp-oam-considerations
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 03)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2012-05-08
Requested 2012-05-01
Draft last updated 2012-05-13
Completed reviews Genart Telechat review of -?? by Brian Carpenter
Tsvdir Last Call review of -?? by Martin Stiemerling
Assignment Reviewer Brian Carpenter
State Completed
Review review-sprecher-mpls-tp-oam-considerations-genart-telechat-carpenter-2012-05-13
Review completed: 2012-05-13

Review
review-sprecher-mpls-tp-oam-considerations-genart-telechat-carpenter-2012-05-13

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Document: draft-sprecher-mpls-tp-oam-considerations-03.txt
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2012-05-04
IETF LC End Date: 2011-10-24
IESG Telechat date: 2012-05-10

Summary:  Ready
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Comments:
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My Last Call comments have been addressed, and the document now reads
more logically, due to material being moved to the appendices.

Nit:
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There is duplicated text in section 1.2:

   be managed using tools with similar look and feel.  The requirements
   specifications [RFC5654] and [RFC5860] specifications [RFC5654] and
   [RFC5860] capture the essential issues that must be resolved to allow