Telechat Review of draft-richer-vectors-of-trust-12
review-richer-vectors-of-trust-12-genart-telechat-worley-2018-07-22-00

Request Review of draft-richer-vectors-of-trust
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 15)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-07-31
Requested 2018-07-14
Draft last updated 2018-07-22
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -11 by Dale Worley (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -12 by Dale Worley (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -11 by Klaas Wierenga (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Dale Worley
State Completed
Review review-richer-vectors-of-trust-12-genart-telechat-worley-2018-07-22
Reviewed rev. 12 (document currently at 15)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2018-07-22

Review
review-richer-vectors-of-trust-12-genart-telechat-worley-2018-07-22

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Document:  draft-richer-vectors-of-trust-12
Reviewer:  Dale R. Worley
Review Date:  2018-07-22
IETF LC End Date:  2018-06-26
IESG Telechat date:  2018-08-02

Summary:

   This draft is ready for publication as a Standards Track RFC.

Nit:

   3.1.  On-the-Wire Representation

   Vector values MUST be communicated along with of a trustmark URL
   (Section 5) to give the components and component values context.

s/with of/with/

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