Last Call Review of draft-perrault-behave-natv2-mib-03
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Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-04-29
Requested 2015-04-02
Authors Simon Perreault, Tina Tsou, Senthil Sivakumar, Tom Taylor
Draft last updated 2015-04-30
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -03 by Suresh Krishnan (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -03 by Takeshi Takahashi (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -03 by Sheng Jiang (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Suresh Krishnan
State Completed
Review review-perrault-behave-natv2-mib-03-genart-lc-krishnan-2015-04-30
Reviewed rev. 03 (document currently at 05)
Review result Ready with Issues
Review completed: 2015-04-30

Review
review-perrault-behave-natv2-mib-03-genart-lc-krishnan-2015-04-30

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Document: draft-perrault-behave-natv2-mib-03.txt
Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan
Review Date: 2015-04-29
IETF LC End Date: 2015-04-29

Summary: There are some minor issues in the draft that need to be fixed 
before publication as a Proposed Standard.

* Some objects and the their textual conventions vary only by case. 
There are three such instances

natv2SubscriberIndex and Natv2SubscriberIndex
natv2InstanceIndex and Natv2InstanceIndex
natv2PoolIndex and Natv2PoolIndex

* The natv2PoolRangeBegin and natv2PoolRangeEnd do not have an 
immediately preceding InetAddressType object as required by RFC4001.

Thanks
Suresh