Last Call Review of draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcweb-rtcp-xr-metrics-08
review-ietf-xrblock-rtcweb-rtcp-xr-metrics-08-genart-lc-sparks-2018-02-19-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcweb-rtcp-xr-metrics
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-02-23
Requested 2018-02-09
Authors Varun Singh, Rachel Huang, Roni Even, Dan Romascanu, Deng Lingli
Draft last updated 2018-02-19
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -08 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Brian Weis (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -09 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Robert Sparks
State Completed
Review review-ietf-xrblock-rtcweb-rtcp-xr-metrics-08-genart-lc-sparks-2018-02-19
Reviewed rev. 08 (document currently at 10)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2018-02-19

Review
review-ietf-xrblock-rtcweb-rtcp-xr-metrics-08-genart-lc-sparks-2018-02-19

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Document: draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcweb-rtcp-xr-metrics-08
Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review Date: 2018-02-19
IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-23
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Ready for publication as an Informational RFC, but with nits to consider before publication

The document argues to include things in the W3C statistics API in the last paragraph of 5.2.2.
Section 7 seems to say those have been included already. 
It would be good to rework both of these mentions to reflect what's true at the time of the publication of the RFC, in a way that the text will make sense when read years from now.