Last Call Review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-rlc-fec-scheme-07
review-ietf-tsvwg-rlc-fec-scheme-07-genart-lc-housley-2018-09-14-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-rlc-fec-scheme
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 16)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-09-24
Requested 2018-09-10
Draft last updated 2018-09-14
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Alan DeKok (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -07 by Russ Housley (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Russ Housley
State Completed
Review review-ietf-tsvwg-rlc-fec-scheme-07-genart-lc-housley-2018-09-14
Reviewed rev. 07 (document currently at 16)
Review result Almost Ready
Review completed: 2018-09-14

Review
review-ietf-tsvwg-rlc-fec-scheme-07-genart-lc-housley-2018-09-14

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Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-rlc-fec-scheme-07
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2018-09-14
IETF LC End Date: 2018-09-24
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Almost Ready


Major Concerns:

None.


Minor Concerns:

Section 2: Please update the first paragraph to reference RFC 8174
in addition to RFC 2119, as follows: 

   The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALL NOT",
   "SHOULD", "SHOULD NOT", "RECOMMENDED", "NOT RECOMMENDED", "MAY", and
   "OPTIONAL" in this document are to be interpreted as described in BCP
   14 [RFC2119] [RFC8174] when, and only when, they appear in all
   capitals, as shown here.

Section 2: Please add the definition of ^^.

Section 12.1: Please add a normative reference to RFC 8174.

The code in Appendix A will not compile using gcc unless you add:

	#include <stdint.h>