Last Call Review of draft-ietf-teas-lsp-attribute-ro-02
review-ietf-teas-lsp-attribute-ro-02-opsdir-lc-chittimaneni-2015-02-17-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-teas-lsp-attribute-ro
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 05)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2015-02-18
Requested 2015-02-05
Authors Cyril Margaria, Giovanni Martinelli, Steve Balls, Ben Wright
Draft last updated 2015-02-17
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -02 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -04 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -02 by Kiran Chittimaneni (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Kiran Chittimaneni
State Completed
Review review-ietf-teas-lsp-attribute-ro-02-opsdir-lc-chittimaneni-2015-02-17
Reviewed rev. 02 (document currently at 05)
Review result Has Nits
Review completed: 2015-02-17

Review
review-ietf-teas-lsp-attribute-ro-02-opsdir-lc-chittimaneni-2015-02-17

Hi,

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written with the intent of improving the
operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not
addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG
review.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments
just like any other last call comments.

This document defines an extension to the RSVP ERO and RRO objects to
allow it to specify or record generic attributes which apply to a
given hop

Summary: This document is ready with nits

Section 3.2.1. Second sentence has the word 'in' repeated twice.
idnits throws some warnings that should be looked at

Regards,
KK