Telechat Review of draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-12
review-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-12-secdir-telechat-weis-2019-06-26-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 18)
Type Telechat Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2019-06-25
Requested 2019-06-10
Authors JADHAV Rahul, Pascal Thubert, Rabi Sahoo, Zhen Cao
Draft last updated 2019-06-26
Completed reviews Iotdir Last Call review of -11 by Shwetha Bhandari (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -10 by Brian Weis (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -10 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Rtgdir Telechat review of -12 by Eric Gray (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -12 by Brian Weis (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Brian Weis
State Completed
Review review-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-12-secdir-telechat-weis-2019-06-26
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/qlrv90yt_CfCoXZSfZ6YC2RSG_U
Reviewed rev. 12 (document currently at 18)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2019-06-26

Review
review-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-12-secdir-telechat-weis-2019-06-26

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

I previously reviewed draft version 10, and asked that some text should be added to describe a new risk that the new NPDAO message adds to ROLL. Draft version 12 adds that text, and I don't have any further comments.