Telechat Review of draft-ietf-pce-wson-rwa-ext-11

Request Review of draft-ietf-pce-wson-rwa-ext
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 17)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2019-02-05
Requested 2019-01-21
Authors Young Lee, Ramon Casellas
Draft last updated 2019-01-28
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -08 by Ravi Singh (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -10 by Elwyn Davies (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -10 by Watson Ladd (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -11 by Elwyn Davies (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Elwyn Davies
State Completed
Review review-ietf-pce-wson-rwa-ext-11-genart-telechat-davies-2019-01-28
Reviewed rev. 11 (document currently at 17)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2019-01-28


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Document: draft-ietf-pce-wson-rwa-ext-117
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 2019-01-28
IETF LC End Date: 2018-12-27
IESG Telechat date: 2019-02-07

Ready.  There are a couple of trivial nits remaining. Otherwise, thanks very much for addressing my last call comments. 

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments: 
S3: The expansion of 3R needs to be at first occurrence. This is one paragraph earlier than the added expansion in v11.

S3, next to last para: need to expand FEC.

S4.1, para 5: s/to the allocation/used for the allocation/