Telechat Review of draft-ietf-ospf-ospfv3-iid-registry-update-03

Request Review of draft-ietf-ospf-ospfv3-iid-registry-update
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 04)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-04-23
Requested 2013-04-17
Authors Alvaro Retana, Dean Cheng
Draft last updated 2013-07-29
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -00 by Ben Campbell (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -03 by Ben Campbell (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Ben Campbell
State Completed
Review review-ietf-ospf-ospfv3-iid-registry-update-03-genart-telechat-campbell-2013-07-29
Reviewed rev. 03 (document currently at 04)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2013-07-29


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Document:  draft-ietf-ospf-ospfv3-iid-registry-update-03
Reviewer: Ben Campbell
Review Date: 2013-04-19
IESG Telechat date: 2013-04-25

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a proposed standard. All of the comments from my review of 00 at last call have been addressed.

Major issues:


Minor issues:


Nits/editorial comments:

-- The abstract should mention that this draft now updates RFC 5838.

-- IDNits has a comment about the lack of pre-5378 work boilerplate that I do not think is valid in this case--but it might be worth checking.