Early Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-iot-dns-considerations-02
review-ietf-opsawg-mud-iot-dns-considerations-02-genart-early-kyzivat-2021-12-18-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-iot-dns-considerations-02 |
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| Requested revision | 02 (document currently at 13) | |
| Type | Early Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2021-12-20 | |
| Requested | 2021-12-03 | |
| Requested by | Henk Birkholz | |
| Authors | Michael Richardson , Wei Pan | |
| I-D last updated | 2021-12-18 | |
| Completed reviews |
Dnsdir Last Call review of -12
by Nicolai Leymann
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Iotdir Telechat review of -12 by Dave Thaler (diff) Secdir Early review of -03 by Christopher A. Wood (diff) Genart Early review of -02 by Paul Kyzivat (diff) Intdir Early review of -02 by David Lamparter (diff) Iotdir Early review of -02 by Dave Thaler (diff) |
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| Comments |
This is a rather short document. Currently, the document literally includes notes that highlight the need for more expositional text. Some external hints would be beneficial, I think. There's also been a bit of a discussion about geofencing and potential issues with bundling the MUD manager with resolvers. |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Paul Kyzivat |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Early review on draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-iot-dns-considerations by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/jV4U_nM_vhGwY5dxx-VTVfalNVE | |
| Reviewed revision | 02 (document currently at 13) | |
| Result | On the Right Track | |
| Completed | 2021-12-18 |
review-ietf-opsawg-mud-iot-dns-considerations-02-genart-early-kyzivat-2021-12-18-00
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