Last Call Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mibs-to-ieee80231-01
review-ietf-opsawg-mibs-to-ieee80231-01-genart-lc-dupont-2014-11-07-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mibs-to-ieee80231
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 01)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2014-11-23
Requested 2014-10-30
Authors Tom Taylor, Dan Romascanu
Draft last updated 2014-11-07
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -01 by Francis Dupont
Secdir Last Call review of -01 by Alexey Melnikov
Assignment Reviewer Francis Dupont 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-opsawg-mibs-to-ieee80231-01-genart-lc-dupont-2014-11-07
Reviewed rev. 01
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2014-11-07

Review
review-ietf-opsawg-mibs-to-ieee80231-01-genart-lc-dupont-2014-11-07

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at

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Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-mibs-to-ieee80231-01.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20141104
IETF LC End Date: 20141106
IESG Telechat date: 20141125

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
 - ToC page 2 and 7 page 5: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments
  (BTW what is the favorite spelling in Canada: UK or US one?)

Regards

Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr