Last Call Review of draft-ietf-oauth-urn-sub-ns-05
review-ietf-oauth-urn-sub-ns-05-genart-lc-campbell-2012-07-04-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-oauth-urn-sub-ns
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2012-07-11
Requested 2012-06-28
Authors Brian Campbell, Hannes Tschofenig
Draft last updated 2012-07-04
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -05 by Ben Campbell (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -?? by Tero Kivinen
Assignment Reviewer Ben Campbell
State Completed
Review review-ietf-oauth-urn-sub-ns-05-genart-lc-campbell-2012-07-04
Reviewed rev. 05 (document currently at 06)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2012-07-04

Review
review-ietf-oauth-urn-sub-ns-05-genart-lc-campbell-2012-07-04

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Document: draft-ietf-oauth-urn-sub-ns-05
Reviewer: Ben Campbell
Review Date: 2012-07-03
IETF LC End Date: 2012-07-11

Summary: Ready for publication as a proposed standard

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

-- section 2:

The RFC 2119 boilerplate is present, but I don't notice any 2119 normative language.

-- section 4, first sentence: "None not already inherent to using URNs."

Sentence Fragment.

-- section 5.1, last bullet, "... values subordinate to urn:ietf:params:oauth are of the from ..."

Missing word?