Last Call Review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-scsi-layout-06
review-ietf-nfsv4-scsi-layout-06-genart-lc-halpern-2016-07-06-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-scsi-layout
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2016-07-12
Requested 2016-06-30
Draft last updated 2016-07-06
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -06 by Joel Halpern (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -06 by Stephen Kent (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Victor Kuarsingh (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Joel Halpern
State Completed
Review review-ietf-nfsv4-scsi-layout-06-genart-lc-halpern-2016-07-06
Reviewed rev. 06 (document currently at 10)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2016-07-06

Review
review-ietf-nfsv4-scsi-layout-06-genart-lc-halpern-2016-07-06

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Document: draft-ietf-nfsv4-scsi-layout-06.txt
    Parallel NFS (pNFS) SCSI Layout
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 5-July-2016
IETF LC End Date: 12-July-2016
IESG Telechat date: N/A

Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard.



The reviewer notes that he fouund the document quite readable, but 


nonetheless made no effort to review the storage details.




Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:


    It seems likely that the cross-reference in section 3.3 paragraph 1 


which points to section 2.1 is actually intended to point to section 3.1