Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mpls-rmr-12
review-ietf-mpls-rmr-12-genart-lc-dupont-2019-11-05-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-mpls-rmr
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 12)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2019-11-05
Requested 2019-10-22
Authors Kireeti Kompella, Luis Contreras
Draft last updated 2019-11-05
Completed reviews Rtgdir Early review of -09 by Susan Hares (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -11 by Susan Hares (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -12 by Colin Perkins
Genart Last Call review of -12 by Francis Dupont
Secdir Last Call review of -12 by Derek Atkins
Opsdir Last Call review of -12 by Nagendra Kumar
Assignment Reviewer Francis Dupont
State Completed
Review review-ietf-mpls-rmr-12-genart-lc-dupont-2019-11-05
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/vKHMzQ11yMMXpTiw6MmnC5I_2UY
Reviewed rev. 12
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2019-11-05

Review
review-ietf-mpls-rmr-12-genart-lc-dupont-2019-11-05

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.

For more information, please see the FAQ at

<https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Document: draft-ietf-mpls-rmr-12.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20191028
IETF LC End Date: 20191105
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
 - Requirement Language page 1: please add a reference to RFC 8174

 - 3.1 page 5: overriden -> overridden

 - 4.1 page 10 on Ring Node TLV: please swap SO and MBZ descriptions

 - 4.3 page 11: announcment -> announcement

 - 4.5 pafe 12: ; and -> and ; ?

Note that none requires a new version so address them only if you have
another reason to publish a new version of the document.

Regards 

Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr