Last Call Review of draft-ietf-httpbis-legally-restricted-status-04
review-ietf-httpbis-legally-restricted-status-04-genart-lc-halpern-2015-11-24-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-httpbis-legally-restricted-status
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 04)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-12-04
Requested 2015-11-23
Draft last updated 2015-11-24
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -04 by Joel Halpern
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Tero Kivinen
Opsdir Last Call review of -04 by Fred Baker
Assignment Reviewer Joel Halpern
State Completed
Review review-ietf-httpbis-legally-restricted-status-04-genart-lc-halpern-2015-11-24
Reviewed rev. 04
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2015-11-24

Review
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Document: draft-ietf-httpbis-legally-restricted-status-04
    An HTTP Status Code to Report Legal Obstacles
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 24-November-2015
IETF LC End Date: 4- December-2015
IESG Telechat date: N/A

Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:


    In the introduction, would it be more accurate to say that this is 


for use when the server operator has received and is complying with a 


legal demand ...?