Telechat Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-signaling-12
review-ietf-ccamp-wson-signaling-12-genart-telechat-dupont-2015-06-03-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-signaling |
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| Requested rev. | no specific revision (document currently at 12) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2015-05-26 | |
| Requested | 2015-05-20 | |
| Authors | Greg Bernstein, Sugang Xu, Young Lee, Giovanni Martinelli, Hiroaki Harai | |
| Draft last updated | 2015-06-03 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -09 by Francis Dupont
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Genart Telechat review of -12 by Francis Dupont Secdir Last Call review of -09 by Benjamin Kaduk (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -10 by Tim Wicinski (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Francis Dupont |
| State | Completed | |
| Review | review-ietf-ccamp-wson-signaling-12-genart-telechat-dupont-2015-06-03 | |
| Reviewed rev. | 12 | |
| Review result | Ready | |
| Review completed: | 2015-06-03 |
Review
review-ietf-ccamp-wson-signaling-12-genart-telechat-dupont-2015-06-03
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-signaling-09.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20150313 IETF LC End Date: 20150318 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: I read the 09 version but was too busy to prepare the IETF meeting to send these few comments. Note I know the 10 version is available so I adjusted by comments (i.e., I don't raise concerns about removed or improved texts :-). - 2 page 4 (end node): e.g. -> e.g., (it seems the very few other comments no longer apply! :-) Thanks Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr