Last Call Review of draft-ietf-bess-mvpn-expl-track-09
review-ietf-bess-mvpn-expl-track-09-rtgdir-lc-pignataro-2018-09-12-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-bess-mvpn-expl-track |
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| Requested rev. | no specific revision (document currently at 13) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir) | |
| Deadline | 2018-09-24 | |
| Requested | 2018-05-07 | |
| Requested by | Martin Vigoureux | |
| Draft last updated | 2018-09-12 | |
| Completed reviews |
Rtgdir Last Call review of -09 by Carlos Pignataro
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Secdir Last Call review of -11 by Christian Huitema (diff) Genart Last Call review of -10 by Brian Carpenter (diff) Genart Telechat review of -12 by Brian Carpenter (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Carlos Pignataro |
| State | Completed | |
| Review | review-ietf-bess-mvpn-expl-track-09-rtgdir-lc-pignataro-2018-09-12 | |
| Reviewed rev. | 09 (document currently at 13) | |
| Review result | Has Nits | |
| Review completed: | 2018-09-12 |
Review
review-ietf-bess-mvpn-expl-track-09-rtgdir-lc-pignataro-2018-09-12
This is a very well written and detailed document. I have only one concern, which I believe should be addressed before moving this document forward: I found the rational and specific details on what this document "Updates" from three previous RFCs to be lacking, and confusing. I recommend an "Updates from RFC XYZ" section in which there is a textual explanation and ideally Old/New specifics on how this document updates previous RFCs. At least, something more inline with current thinking as per https://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/ietf/current/msg109106.html Thanks, Carlos Pignataro.