Telechat Review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpws-11
review-ietf-bess-evpn-vpws-11-genart-telechat-even-2017-04-08-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpws
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 14)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-04-11
Requested 2017-02-24
Draft last updated 2017-04-08
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -10 by Acee Lindem (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -11 by Matthew Miller (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -10 by Roni Even (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -11 by Roni Even (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -12 by Roni Even (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Roni Even
State Completed
Review review-ietf-bess-evpn-vpws-11-genart-telechat-even-2017-04-08
Reviewed rev. 11 (document currently at 14)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2017-04-08

Review
review-ietf-bess-evpn-vpws-11-genart-telechat-even-2017-04-08

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Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpws-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2017-04-08
IETF LC End Date: 2017-03-10
IESG Telechat date: 2017-04-13

Summary:

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments: 

In section 1 second paragraph "[RFC7432] provides the ability " looks like the reference is not a link to RFC7432.