Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ancp-pon-04
review-ietf-ancp-pon-04-genart-lc-even-2012-04-09-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ancp-pon
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 05)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2012-04-10
Requested 2012-04-09
Authors Nabil Bitar, Sanjay Wadhwa, Thomas Haag, Li Hongyu
Draft last updated 2012-04-09
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -?? by Roni Even
Genart Last Call review of -04 by Roni Even (diff)
Tsvdir Early review of -?? by Allison Mankin
Assignment Reviewer Roni Even
State Completed
Review review-ietf-ancp-pon-04-genart-lc-even-2012-04-09
Reviewed rev. 04 (document currently at 05)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2012-04-09

Review
review-ietf-ancp-pon-04-genart-lc-even-2012-04-09

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

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Document: 

draft-ietf-ancp-pon-04

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2013–2–12

IETF LC End Date: 2013-2–19

IESG Telechat date: 

 

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC

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Nits/editorial comments:

OMCI is expanded very late in the document and not on the first usage.