Delay-Tolerant Networking Architecture
draft-irtf-dtnrg-arch-08

[Ballot discuss]
This is not a big issue and can easily be fixed but ideally, I don't believe that this document should have made it to the telechat agenda yet while missing some of the basic requirements from draft-irtf-rfcs-00.txt which we are supposed to use to judge this document:

draft-irtf-rfcs-00.txt says in section '2.1.  Research Group Preparation':

  The document should have a statement in the abstract identifying the
  document as the product of the RG and a paragraph in the first
  section describing the level of support for the document (e.g., "this
  document represents the consensus of the FOOBAR RG", "the views in
  this document were considered controversial by the FOOBAR RG but the
  RG reached a consensus that the document should still be published")
  and the breadth of review for the document.

I cannot find any of this in the abstract.

[Ballot discuss]
This document should not have been on the agenda yet:

draft-irtf-rfcs-00.txt says in section '2.1.  Research Group Preparation':

  The document should have a statement in the abstract identifying the
  document as the product of the RG and a paragraph in the first
  section describing the level of support for the document (e.g., "this
  document represents the consensus of the FOOBAR RG", "the views in
  this document were considered controversial by the FOOBAR RG but the
  RG reached a consensus that the document should still be published")
  and the breadth of review for the document.

I cannot find any of this in the abstract.

[Ballot comment]
Note that the last sentence of the IESG Note is a bit different than what is currently in draft-irtf-rfcs-00. Aaron (author of draft-irtf-rfcs) likes this change and may roll it into -01.

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