A Framework for Loop-Free Convergence
draft-ietf-rtgwg-lf-conv-frmwk-07

[Ballot comment]
Section 3 has

  Throughout this document we use the term SRLG to describe
  the procedure to be followed when multiple failures have occurred
  whether or not they are members of an explicit SRLG.

s/to describe/when describing/

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Echo the point on the the ToS byte.
Suggest to completely remove the sentence.

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I think it is unfortunate that section 12 is so skinny. I presume that
if I am able to induce micro loops (perhaps by flapping a resource) I
could cause considerable network disruption and so using loop prevention
or mitigation is a protection.

[Ballot comment]
Very nice document overall!

Section 6.5., paragraph 5:
>    This
>    could, for example, be achieved by allocating a Type of Service bit
>    to the task[RFC0791].  This mechanism works identically for both
>    "bad-news" and "good-news" events.  It also works identically for
>    SRLG failure.  There are three problems with this solution:

  There is no "ToS byte" anymore since DiffServ was published. Using a
  DSCP for that purpose is also not really in tune with the DiffServ
  architecture. Suggest to remove this example or point out in the list
  following this paragraph that that's also a drawback.

PROTO writeup by John Scudder:

draft-ietf-rtgwg-lf-conv-frmwk

    (1.a) Who is the Document Shepherd for this document? Has the
          Document Shepherd personally reviewed this version of the
          document and, in particular, does he or she believe this
          version is ready for forwarding to the IESG for publication?

John Scudder.  Yes.

    (1.b) Has the document had adequate review both from key WG members
          and from key non-WG members? Does the Document Shepherd have
          any concerns about the depth or breadth of the reviews that
          have been performed?

The document has been published for some time and has received substantive comments which indicates to me that at least some WG members have read it carefully.

    (1.c) Does the Document Shepherd have concerns that the document
          needs more review from a particular or broader perspective,
          e.g., security, operational complexity, someone familiar with
          AAA, internationalization or XML?

No.

    (1.d) Does the Document Shepherd have any specific concerns or
          issues with this document that the Responsible Area Director
          and/or the IESG should be aware of? For example, perhaps he
          or she is uncomfortable with certain parts of the document, or
          has concerns whether there really is a need for it. In any
          event, if the WG has discussed those issues and has indicated
          that it still wishes to advance the document, detail those
          concerns here. Has an IPR disclosure related to this document
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          disclosure and summarize the WG discussion and conclusion on
          this issue.

I generally take a somewhat skeptical view of framework documents but this one seems worthwhile and I think it should be published.

    (1.e) How solid is the WG consensus behind this document? Does it
          represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with
          others being silent, or does the WG as a whole understand and
          agree with it?

I would describe the consensus as "silence gives assent".  Since this is a framework and a very mature one at that, it's somewhat difficult to generate enthusiasm.

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          document satisfies all ID nits? (See
          http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html and
          http://tools.ietf.org/tools/idnits/). Boilerplate checks are
          not enough; this check needs to be thorough. Has the document
          met all formal review criteria it needs to, such as the MIB
          Doctor, media type and URI type reviews?

IDNits throws a warnings for pre-RFC5378.  I don't think there's a problem and have verified with the authors that they don't either.

IDNits throws an outdated reference warning, but the warning is erroneous.  (I double-checked; the latest version of draft-ietf-rtgwg-ordered-fib is -02.)

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          strategy for their completion? Are there normative references
          that are downward references, as described in [RFC3967]? If
          so, list these downward references to support the Area
          Director in the Last Call procedure for them [RFC3967].

Refs are fine.

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          procedure for future registrations? Does it suggest a
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          document describes an Expert Review process has Shepherd
          conferred with the Responsible Area Director so that the IESG
          can appoint the needed Expert during the IESG Evaluation?

This is fine too.

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N/A.

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              and/or introduction of the document. If not, this may be
              an indication that there are deficiencies in the abstract
              or introduction.
          Working Group Summary
              Was there anything in WG process that is worth noting? For
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              were there decisions where the consensus was particularly
              rough?
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Technical Summary
    This draft describes mechanisms that may be used to prevent or to
    suppress the formation of micro-loops when an IP or MPLS network
    undergoes topology change due to failure, repair or management
    action.

Working Group Summary
    This document has been evolving since 2006 and reflects a good
    summary of the approaches explored by the WG.  The document is
    non-controversial.

Document Quality
    The document is a framework intended as an Informational RFC and
    does not specify a protocol.  It has received reasonable review from
    WG members.