BGP-4 Protocol Analysis
draft-ietf-idr-bgp-analysis-07
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Document history
Date | Rev. | By | Action |
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2012-08-22
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07 | (System) | post-migration administrative database adjustment to the No Objection position for Thomas Narten |
2012-08-22
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07 | (System) | post-migration administrative database adjustment to the No Objection position for Bert Wijnen |
2012-08-22
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07 | (System) | post-migration administrative database adjustment to the No Objection position for Margaret Wasserman |
2012-08-22
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07 | (System) | post-migration administrative database adjustment to the No Objection position for Harald Alvestrand |
2012-08-22
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07 | (System) | post-migration administrative database adjustment to the No Objection position for Russ Housley |
2006-01-17
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07 | (System) | This was part of a ballot set with: draft-iesg-tcpmd5app, draft-ietf-idr-bgp-implementation, draft-ietf-idr-bgp-mibagent-survey, draft-ietf-idr-bgp-vuln, draft-ietf-idr-bgp4, draft-ietf-idr-bgp4-experience-protocol, draft-ietf-idr-bgp4-mib |
2005-01-31
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07 | Amy Vezza | State Changes to RFC Ed Queue from Approved-announcement sent by Amy Vezza |
2005-01-31
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07 | Amy Vezza | IESG state changed to Approved-announcement sent |
2005-01-31
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07 | Amy Vezza | IESG has approved the document |
2005-01-31
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07 | Amy Vezza | Closed "Approve" ballot |
2005-01-28
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07 | Alex Zinin | State Changes to Approved-announcement to be sent from Approved-announcement to be sent::Point Raised - writeup needed by Alex Zinin |
2004-12-03
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07 | (System) | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-analysis-07.txt |
2004-12-03
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07 | (System) | Removed from agenda for telechat - 2004-12-02 |
2004-12-02
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07 | Amy Vezza | State Changes to Approved-announcement to be sent::Point Raised - writeup needed from IESG Evaluation by Amy Vezza |
2004-12-01
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07 | Michelle Cotton | IANA Comments: We understand this document to have NO IANA Actions. |
2004-12-01
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07 | Margaret Cullen | [Ballot Position Update] Position for Margaret Wasserman has been changed to No Objection from Discuss by Margaret Wasserman |
2004-12-01
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07 | Harald Alvestrand | Re-review by Elwyn Davies, Gen-ART (following up on Lucy Lynch): Hi. I was asked to take a look at this doc, re-reviewing it after fixes … Re-review by Elwyn Davies, Gen-ART (following up on Lucy Lynch): Hi. I was asked to take a look at this doc, re-reviewing it after fixes relating to comments on -05 by Lucy Lynch. Unfortunately the updates don't appear to have taken care of many of the formatting and boilerplate issues flagged by idnits. There are still several over-long lines and hyphenations plus the URL for the list of I-Ds is still wrong. Idnits output follows: idnits 1.51 tmp/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-analysis-06.txt: tmp/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-analysis-06.txt(41): Line is too long: the offending characters are 'ld be' tmp/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-analysis-06.txt(189): Line seems to end with a hyphenated word. --> that routing within an autonomous system is done by an intra- tmp/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-analysis-06.txt(368): Line seems to end with a hyphenated word. --> flapping. However, although peer oscillation is found to be wide- tmp/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-analysis-06.txt(447): Line seems to end with a hyphenated word. --> The aggregation scheme, defined in [CIDR],describes the provider- tmp/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-analysis-06.txt(540): Line is too long: the offending characters are '--' tmp/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-analysis-06.txt(581): Line seems to end with a hyphenated word. --> interactions with network engineers in an environment lacking vendor- tmp/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-analysis-06.txt(630): Line has weird spacing: '... AS4 is a mul...' tmp/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-analysis-06.txt(749): Line is too long: the offending characters are 'd' tmp/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-analysis-06.txt(750): Line is too long: the offending characters are 'ts' tmp/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-analysis-06.txt(754): Line is too long: the offending characters are 're' tmp/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-analysis-06.txt(756): Line is too long: the offending characters are 'g' tmp/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-analysis-06.txt(757): Line is too long: the offending characters are 'ic' tmp/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-analysis-06.txt(762): Line is too long: the offending characters are 'AS' tmp/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-analysis-06.txt(951): Line is too long: the offending characters are 's for' tmp/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-analysis-06.txt(952): Line is too long: the offending characters are 'rogress.' tmp/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-analysis-06.txt(957): Line is too long: the offending characters are 'P",' Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html: Checking conformance with RFC 3667/3668 boilerplate... the boilerplate looks good. Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/ietf/1id-guidelines.txt: The document seems to lack a 1id_guidelines paragraph about the list of current Internet-Drafts -- however, there's a paragraph with a matching beginning. Boilerplate error? (Expected a match on the following text: "The list of current Internet-Drafts can be accessed at http://www.ietf.org/1id-abstracts.html" ... but found this: "The list of current Internet-Drafts can be accessed at http://www.ietf.org/ietf/1id-abstracts.txt.") Miscellaneous warnings: None Other matters relating to language: =================================== Terminology: There is a considerable amount of terminology in the document which is not defined either explicitly or by reference, notably BGP speaker, peer, EBGP Some language improvements: Section 1: s/Classless InterDomain/Classless Inter-Domain/ in line with title of [CIDR] Section 2.1, para 1: s/network layer reachability information/Network Layer Reachability Information/ Section 2.2, para 1, last sentence: s/assist/assists/(also in para 2 last sentence), s/select/to select/ Section 2.2, para 2, last sentence: I don't think you can limit congestion to window limits: How about 'The window limits used by TCP further assists BGP to constrain any congestion that might result from updates.' Section 2.2: para 3: s/sent as a single Network Layer Reachability (NLRI)./sent in a single Network Layer Reachability Information (NLRI) attribute./ Section 2.3: s/There may exist a temporary period where in a BGP peer may have separate incoming and outgoing connections resulting into two different BGP FSMs for a peer (instead of one). This can be resolved following BGP connection collision rules defined in the [BGP4]./ There may be a short period during which a BGP peer may have separate incoming and outgoing connections resulting in the creation of two different BGP FSMs relating to a peer (instead of one). This can be resolved by following the BGP connection collision rules defined in the [BGP4] specification./ Section 2.3, para 3: s/Following are different states of BGP FSM for its peers:/The BGP FSM has the following states associated with each of its peers:/ Section 2.3, next to last para: s/different/a number of/, s/BGP FSM/the BGP FSM/, s/These BGP events are/Support of these BGP events is/, s/using an/as a result of/ Section 2.3, last para: s/Both,/Both/ s/in details/in detail/ Section 4: Should be consistent in using either 'flapping' or 'oscillation'. Flapping is normally used with routes. Section 4: Is 'Ideally' the right word? ... Maybe either 'By default' or 'According to [BGP]' Section 5: s/bound,/bounded,/ s/loosing/losing/g s/clesrly/is clearly/ Section 6.1: s/,describes/, describes/ Section 6.1.1: s/announcments/announcements/ s/During the periods/During periods/ Section 6.1.2: s/byte/octet/g s/(and ignoring/(ignoring/ Section 7, para 2: s/provided hundreds/provide hundreds/ [? really hundreds??] s/more and more/increasingly/ Section 7: s/nondeterminism/non-determinism/g Section 8: s/we answer the question of which environments is BGP well suited/we identify the environments for which BGP is well suited/ Section 8, para 3: s/that allow/that allows/ Section 8, lata para: s/suitable/suited/ Section 10: s/exhanged/exchanged/ s/guage/gauge/ s/vulneribility/vulnerability/ Section 10: Need to expand the EBGP abbreviation. Section 10: The reference to [SOBGP] is inconsistent with the list of refs [soBGP]. Also another couple of editorial nits: (Throughout) There are multiple blank lines surrounding section headings and in some cases between paragraphs - a single blank line would save paper. Regards, Elwyn Davies |
2004-11-29
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07 | Thomas Narten | [Ballot Position Update] Position for Thomas Narten has been changed to No Objection from Discuss by Thomas Narten |
2004-11-28
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07 | Margaret Cullen | [Ballot Position Update] Position for Margaret Wasserman has been changed to Discuss from No Objection by Margaret Wasserman |
2004-11-23
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07 | Bert Wijnen | [Ballot Position Update] Position for Bert Wijnen has been changed to No Objection from Discuss by Bert Wijnen |
2004-11-23
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07 | Sam Hartman | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Sam Hartman by Sam Hartman |
2004-11-23
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07 | Alex Zinin | State Changes to IESG Evaluation from IESG Evaluation::AD Followup by Alex Zinin |
2004-11-23
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07 | Alex Zinin | Placed on agenda for telechat - 2004-12-02 by Alex Zinin |
2004-09-16
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07 | Russ Housley | [Ballot Position Update] Position for Russ Housley has been changed to No Objection from Discuss by Russ Housley |
2004-08-30
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07 | (System) | Sub state has been changed to AD Follow up from New Id Needed |
2004-08-30
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06 | (System) | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-analysis-06.txt |
2004-07-22
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07 | Amy Vezza | State Changes to IESG Evaluation::Revised ID Needed from IESG Evaluation by Amy Vezza |
2004-07-22
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07 | Amy Vezza | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Allison Mankin by Amy Vezza |
2004-07-22
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07 | Thomas Narten | [Ballot Position Update] Position for Thomas Narten has been changed to Discuss from No Objection by Thomas Narten |
2004-07-22
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07 | Thomas Narten | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Thomas Narten by Thomas Narten |
2004-07-22
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07 | Bill Fenner | [Ballot Position Update] New position, Yes, has been recorded for Bill Fenner by Bill Fenner |
2004-07-22
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07 | Jon Peterson | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Jon Peterson by Jon Peterson |
2004-07-22
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07 | Margaret Cullen | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Margaret Wasserman by Margaret Wasserman |
2004-07-21
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07 | Steven Bellovin | |
2004-07-21
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07 | David Kessens | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for David Kessens by David Kessens |
2004-07-21
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07 | Russ Housley | [Ballot Position Update] New position, Discuss, has been recorded for Russ Housley by Russ Housley |
2004-07-21
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07 | Harald Alvestrand | [Ballot Position Update] Position for Harald Alvestrand has been changed to No Objection from Discuss by Harald Alvestrand |
2004-07-21
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07 | Bert Wijnen | [Ballot Position Update] Position for Bert Wijnen has been changed to Discuss from Undefined by Bert Wijnen |
2004-07-21
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07 | Bert Wijnen | [Ballot Position Update] New position, Undefined, has been recorded for Bert Wijnen by Bert Wijnen |
2004-07-21
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07 | Harald Alvestrand | [Ballot Position Update] Position for Harald Alvestrand has been changed to Discuss from Undefined by Harald Alvestrand |
2004-07-20
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07 | Ted Hardie | [Ballot Position Update] Position for Ted Hardie has been changed to No Objection from Undefined by Ted Hardie |
2004-07-20
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07 | Ted Hardie | [Ballot Position Update] New position, Undefined, has been recorded for Ted Hardie by Ted Hardie |
2004-07-20
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07 | Harald Alvestrand | [Ballot Position Update] New position, Undefined, has been recorded for Harald Alvestrand by Harald Alvestrand |
2004-07-15
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07 | Scott Hollenbeck | [Ballot Position Update] Position for Scott Hollenbeck has been changed to No Objection from Undefined by Scott Hollenbeck |
2004-07-15
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07 | Scott Hollenbeck | [Ballot Position Update] New position, Undefined, has been recorded for Scott Hollenbeck by Scott Hollenbeck |
2004-07-15
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07 | Alex Zinin | [Ballot Position Update] Position for Alex Zinin has been changed to Yes from Undefined by Alex Zinin |
2004-07-15
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07 | Alex Zinin | [Ballot Position Update] Position for Alex Zinin has been changed to Undefined from Yes by Alex Zinin |
2004-07-15
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07 | Alex Zinin | State Changes to IESG Evaluation from Waiting for AD Go-Ahead::AD Followup by Alex Zinin |
2004-07-15
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07 | Alex Zinin | Placed on agenda for telechat - 2004-07-22 by Alex Zinin |
2004-07-15
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07 | Alex Zinin | [Ballot Position Update] New position, Yes, has been recorded for Alex Zinin |
2004-07-15
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07 | Alex Zinin | Ballot has been issued by Alex Zinin |
2004-07-15
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07 | Alex Zinin | Created "Approve" ballot |
2004-06-22
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07 | (System) | Sub state has been changed to AD Follow up from New Id Needed |
2004-06-22
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05 | (System) | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-analysis-05.txt |
2004-04-16
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07 | Alex Zinin | State Changes to Waiting for AD Go-Ahead::Revised ID Needed from Waiting for Writeup by Alex Zinin |
2004-04-13
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07 | (System) | State has been changed to Waiting for Writeup from In Last Call by system |
2004-03-16
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07 | Amy Vezza | Last call sent |
2004-03-16
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07 | Amy Vezza | State Changes to In Last Call from Last Call Requested by Amy Vezza |
2004-03-16
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07 | Alex Zinin | Last Call was requested by Alex Zinin |
2004-03-16
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07 | Alex Zinin | State Changes to Last Call Requested from AD Evaluation::Revised ID Needed by Alex Zinin |
2004-03-16
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07 | (System) | Ballot writeup text was added |
2004-03-16
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07 | (System) | Last call text was added |
2004-03-16
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07 | (System) | Ballot approval text was added |
2003-12-10
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07 | Alex Zinin | Intended Status has been changed to Informational from None |
2003-12-10
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07 | Alex Zinin | Draft Added by Alex Zinin |
2003-09-22
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04 | (System) | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-analysis-04.txt |
2003-05-13
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03 | (System) | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-analysis-03.txt |
2003-04-23
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02 | (System) | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-analysis-02.txt |
2003-04-21
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01 | (System) | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-analysis-01.txt |
2003-03-20
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00 | (System) | New version available: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-analysis-00.txt |