Routing and Wavelength Assignment Information Model for Wavelength Switched Optical Networks
draft-ietf-ccamp-rwa-info-24
Yes
(Adrian Farrel)
No Objection
(Alia Atlas)
(Benoît Claise)
(Jari Arkko)
(Joel Jaeggli)
(Kathleen Moriarty)
(Richard Barnes)
(Spencer Dawkins)
(Ted Lemon)
Note: This ballot was opened for revision 23 and is now closed.
Adrian Farrel Former IESG member
Yes
Yes
(for -23)
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Alia Atlas Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
(for -23)
Unknown
Barry Leiba Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
(2014-12-02 for -23)
Unknown
A couple of minor, non-blocking comments that I hope you'll consider: -- Section 2 -- As RFC 6163 is used to define necessary terminology, I think it's a normative reference. -- Section 3 -- I found the first paragraph here to be confusing: one thing can't be grouped into multiple categories, and "regardless" seems not the right word. Also, the sentence (ending in ":") that introduces the list doesn't have anything to do with the list it introduces. May I propose this instead, and let you fix it if I don't have it quite right?: OLD The WSON RWA information model in this document is grouped into four categories regardless of whether they stem from a switching subsystem or from a line subsystem. A switching subsystem refers to WSON nodes such as ROADM or Optical Add/Drop Multiplexer (OADM) and a line subsystem refers to devices such as WDM or Optical Amplifier: NEW The WSON RWA information model in this document comprises four categories of information. The categories are independent of whether the information comes from a switching subsystem or from a line subsystem -- a switching subsystem refers to WSON nodes such as ROADM or Optical Add/Drop Multiplexer (OADM), and a line subsystem refers to devices such as WDM or Optical Amplifier. The categories are these: END
Benoît Claise Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
(2014-12-04 for -23)
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Jari Arkko Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
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Joel Jaeggli Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
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Kathleen Moriarty Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
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Richard Barnes Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
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Unknown
Spencer Dawkins Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
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Unknown
Ted Lemon Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
(for -23)
Unknown