A Taxonomy of Semantics and Mechanisms for Real-Time Transport Protocol (RTP) Sources
draft-ietf-avtext-rtp-grouping-taxonomy-08

Thanks for all your work on this. Caught some nits below.

= Sec 2.1.3 =

s/The time progressing stream/A Raw Stream is the time progressing stream/

= Sec 2.1.5 =

s/A stream of digital samples/A Source Stream is a stream of digital samples/

= Sec 2.1.6 =

s/Such Media Encoder produce/Such Media Encoders produce/

= Sec 2.1.9 =

s/and put their content/and putting their content/

= Sec 2.1.10 =

s/A stream of RTP packets/An RTP Stream is a stream of RTP packets/

= Sec 2.1.12 =

s/A RTP Stream (Section 2.1.10) that contains/A Redundancy RTP Stream is an RTP Stream (Section 2.1.10) that contains/

= Sec 2.1.19 =

s/The RTP Stream that is emitted/The Transported RTP Stream is the RTP Stream that is emitted/

= Sec 2.1.20 =

s/The receiver Endpoint's (Section 2.2.1) transformation/The Media Transport Receiver is the receiver Endpoint's (Section 2.2.1) transformation/

= Sec 2.1.23 =

s/The RTP Stream (Section 2.1.10) resulting/The Received RTP Stream is the RTP Stream (Section 2.1.10) resulting/

= Sec 2.1.24 =

s/The Redundancy RTP Stream (Section 2.1.12) resulting/The Received Redundancy RTP Stream is the Redundancy RTP Stream (Section 2.1.12) resulting/

= Sec 2.1.26 =

s/A Received RTP Stream (Section 2.1.23) for which/A Repaired RTP Stream is a Received RTP Stream (Section 2.1.23) for which/

= Sec 2.1.28 =

s/The received version of/The Received Encoded Stream is the received version of/

= Sec 2.1.30 =

s/The received version of a Source Stream/The Received Source Stream is the received version of a Source Stream/

= Sec 3.1.32 =

s/The received version of a Raw Stream/The Received Raw Stream is the received version of a Raw Stream/

= Sec 2.2.1 =

s/A single addressable entity/An Endpoint is a single addressable entity/

A few editorial comments:

-- section 1: "in Real-Time Transport Protocol"

in _the_ Real-Time Transport Protocol...

"... has previously often been"

has previously been 

-- 4.1 and children:

It's confusing figuring out which section references are to CLUE vs to other sections in this document.

Wow, I wish we'd had this document when RTCWeb and CLUE were starting in parallel! Thank you all for producing it.

Jitter is called out separately from delay in 2.1.16, but not in 2.1.18, 2.1.23, or 2.1.24. Was that intentional?

2.1.16 also calls out inter packet spacings separately. I'm not sure if that's also relevant in 2.1.18, 2.1.23, or 2.1.24, but wanted to ask.