Network Configuration
charter-ietf-netconf-20

No Objection

(Eric Rescorla)
(Spencer Dawkins)

Note: This ballot was opened for revision 18-07 and is now closed.

Ballot question: "Is this charter ready for external review?"

Eric Rescorla Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection (2017-04-07 for -18-08) Unknown 
Can you please reflow this sensibly so that each paragraph is not one giant line?

Editorial comments:

"Working Groiup" -> "Working Group"

4. "the YANG 1.1 constructs" -> "YANG 1.1 constructs"

5. Remove "e.g." as it is redundant with "including"

"Following specifications" -> "The following specifications"

remove "i.e."

These milestones seem crazy aggressive unless the documents are basically already done.
Spencer Dawkins Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection (2017-04-07 for -18-08) Unknown 
Does "which can be used to hold onto asymmetric private keys and certificates" mean "which can be used to hold asymmetric private keys and certificates"?