Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-coman-probstate-reqs
WG: OpsAWG.
Shepherd: Warren Kumari
This version of the writeup is dated 24 February 2012.
(1)Informational - this document is an informational
problem statement and requirements document.
(2) The IESG approval announcement includes a Document Announcement
Write-Up. Please provide such a Document Announcement Write-Up. Recent
examples can be found in the "Action" announcements for approved
documents. The approval announcement contains the following sections:
Technical Summary:
Management of constrained devices, and constrained device networks
present some unique challenges. This document provides a problem
statement,deployment and management topology options, as well as
potential requirements for management of networks with constrained
devices.
Document Quality:
This document provides an overview and introduction to managing
networks with constrained devices. It clearly outlines the issues
and limitation, and lays out some requirements. It is clear and well
written. Special thanks to Thomas Watteyne and Pascal Thubert for
arranging additional review.
Personnel:
Warren Kumari will be the document shepherd, Benoit Claise will be the
AD.
(3) Briefly describe the review of this document that was performed by
the Document Shepherd:
The DS followed the progression of the document through the working
group process, and reviewed the document.
(4) Does the document Shepherd have any concerns about the depth or
breadth of the reviews that have been performed?
Nope. During the Working Group Last Call the chairs of 6TiSCH and 6LO
asked that the WGLC be extended to allow their WG participants to
review the document, and so we extend it by a few weeks. The feedback
from these WGs was positive, and we are counting it in the consensus.
(5) Do portions of the document need review from a particular or from
broader perspective?
Nope.
(6) Describe any specific concerns or issues that the Document
Shepherd has with this document.
None.
(7) Has each author confirmed all appropriate IPR disclosures?
Yes.
(8) Has an IPR disclosure been filed that references this document?
No.
(9) How solid is the WG consensus behind this document?
There is strong consensus from a small group, and good feedback
from 6TiSCH and 6LO.
(10) Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme
discontent?
Nope. Not at all.
(11) Identify any ID nits the Document Shepherd has found in this
document.
No issues found here.
(12) Describe how the document meets any required formal review
criteria.
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either normative or informative?
Yes.
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No normative references exist.
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existing RFCs?
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considerations section.
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future allocations.
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(19) Describe reviews and automated checks performed by the Document
Shepherd to validate sections of the document written in a formal
language.
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