Routing and Wavelength Assignment Information Model for Wavelength Switched Optical Networks
RFC 7446
Note: This ballot was opened for revision 23 and is now closed.
(Adrian Farrel) Yes
(Jari Arkko) No Objection
(Alia Atlas) No Objection
(Richard Barnes) No Objection
(Benoît Claise) No Objection
(Spencer Dawkins) No Objection
(Joel Jaeggli) No Objection
Barry Leiba No Objection
Comment (2014-12-02 for -23)
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A couple of minor, non-blocking comments that I hope you'll consider: -- Section 2 -- As RFC 6163 is used to define necessary terminology, I think it's a normative reference. -- Section 3 -- I found the first paragraph here to be confusing: one thing can't be grouped into multiple categories, and "regardless" seems not the right word. Also, the sentence (ending in ":") that introduces the list doesn't have anything to do with the list it introduces. May I propose this instead, and let you fix it if I don't have it quite right?: OLD The WSON RWA information model in this document is grouped into four categories regardless of whether they stem from a switching subsystem or from a line subsystem. A switching subsystem refers to WSON nodes such as ROADM or Optical Add/Drop Multiplexer (OADM) and a line subsystem refers to devices such as WDM or Optical Amplifier: NEW The WSON RWA information model in this document comprises four categories of information. The categories are independent of whether the information comes from a switching subsystem or from a line subsystem -- a switching subsystem refers to WSON nodes such as ROADM or Optical Add/Drop Multiplexer (OADM), and a line subsystem refers to devices such as WDM or Optical Amplifier. The categories are these: END