Routing and Wavelength Assignment Information Model for Wavelength Switched Optical Networks
RFC 7446

Note: This ballot was opened for revision 23 and is now closed.

(Adrian Farrel) Yes

(Jari Arkko) No Objection

(Alia Atlas) No Objection

(Richard Barnes) No Objection

(Benoît Claise) No Objection

(Spencer Dawkins) No Objection

(Joel Jaeggli) No Objection

Barry Leiba No Objection

Comment (2014-12-02 for -23)
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A couple of minor, non-blocking comments that I hope you'll consider:

-- Section 2 --
As RFC 6163 is used to define necessary terminology, I think it's a normative reference.

-- Section 3 --
I found the first paragraph here to be confusing: one thing can't be grouped into multiple categories, and "regardless" seems not the right word.  Also, the sentence (ending in ":") that introduces the list doesn't have anything to do with the list it introduces.

May I propose this instead, and let you fix it if I don't have it quite right?:

OLD
   The WSON RWA information model in this document is grouped into four
   categories regardless of whether they stem from a switching
   subsystem or from a line subsystem. A switching subsystem refers to
   WSON nodes such as ROADM or Optical Add/Drop Multiplexer (OADM) and
   a line subsystem refers to devices such as WDM or Optical Amplifier:
NEW
   The WSON RWA information model in this document comprises four
   categories of information. The categories are independent of
   whether the information comes from a switching subsystem or from a
   line subsystem -- a switching subsystem refers to WSON nodes such as
   ROADM or Optical Add/Drop Multiplexer (OADM), and a line subsystem
   refers to devices such as WDM or Optical Amplifier. The categories
   are these:
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(Ted Lemon) No Objection

(Kathleen Moriarty) No Objection