Framework for Metric Composition
RFC 5835

Note: This ballot was opened for revision 09 and is now closed.

(Lars Eggert) Yes

(Dan Romascanu) Yes

(Jari Arkko) No Objection

(Ron Bonica) No Objection

(Ralph Droms) (was Discuss) No Objection

(Lisa Dusseault) (was No Record, No Objection) No Objection

(Adrian Farrel) No Objection

Comment (2010-01-07)
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Thank you for a readble document.

I spotted a few nits along the way. If you are working on the document,
you might fix then to save the RFC Editor some effort.


Abstract
s/This new framework memo/This framework/

In five years the framewrok will not be new!

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1.1.2

   Network managers and
   maintenance forces prefer to see results presented very rapidly, to
   detect problems quickly or see if their action has corrected a
   problem.

I stumbled reading "forces" verb or noun.
Suggest

   Network managers and
   maintainers prefer to see results presented very rapidly, to
   detect problems quickly or see if their action has corrected a
   problem.

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1.1.3

s/it may not to be reasonable/it may not be reasonable/

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2.

s/[RFC2330]as/[RFC2330] as/

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5.1

s/are encumbered/is encumbered/

(Russ Housley) No Objection

(Robert Sparks) No Objection