Generalized Multiprotocol Label Switching (GMPLS) Label Switching Router (LSR) Management Information Base
RFC 4803

Note: This ballot was opened for revision 15 and is now closed.

Lars Eggert No Objection

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draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-lsr-mib-14

Section 1., paragraph 2:
>    Comments should be made directly to the CCAMP mailing list at
>    ccamp@ops.ietf.org.

  Remove.


Section 1.1., paragraph 2:
>    LSRs may be migrated to be modeled and managed using the MIB modules
>    in this document in order to migrate the LSRs to GMPLS support, or to
>    take advandtage of additional MIB objects defined in these MIB

  Nit: s/advandtage/advantage/


Section 4.2., paragraph 10:
>    - Optionally specifying segment traffic parameters in the
>      MPLS-LSR-STD-MIB module [RCF3813].

  Nit: s/[RCF3813]./[RFC3813]./


Section 6., paragraph 10:
>       -- RowPointer MUST point to the first accsesible column.

  Nit: s/accsesible/accessible/


Section 7., paragraph 55:
Section 7., paragraph 57:
Section 7., paragraph 72:
Section 7., paragraph 74:
>        "The only valid value for unidrectional LSPs is forward(1)."

  Nit: s/unidrectional/unidirectional/


Section 9., paragraph 7:
>    if the network itself is secure (for example by using IPSec), even

  Nit: s/IPSec),/IPsec),/


Section 10., paragraph 0:
>     10. Acknowledgments

  Nit: Typically after IANA considerations.


Section 10., paragraph 2:
>    This document extends [RFC3813].

  "Extends" as in "updates?" If so, must reflect in
  headers/abstract/intro.


Section 11., paragraph 3:
>    New assignments can only be made via a Standards Action as specified in
>    [RFC2434].

  Missing Reference: 'RFC2434' is mentioned on line 1867, but not
  defined

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draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-tc-mib-10

Section 1., paragraph 3:
>    Comments should be made directly to the CCAMP mailing list at
>    ccamp@ops.ietf.org.

  Nit: Remove.


Section 3., paragraph 23:
>         For manually
>         configured bidirecitonal LSPs, an arbitrary decision must be

  Nit: s/bidirecitonal/bidirectional/


Section 5., paragraph 3:
>    New assignments can only be made via a Standards Action as specified in
>    [RFC2434].

  Nit: Missing Reference: 'RFC2434' is mentioned on line 274, but not
  defined

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draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-te-mib-15

Section 1.1., paragraph 2:
>    LSRs may be migrated to model and manage their TE LSPs using the MIB
>    modules in this document in order to migrate the LSRs to GMPLS
>    support, or to take advandtage of additional MIB objects defined in

  Nit: s/advandtage/advantage/


Section 8., paragraph 185:
>         If the value of
>         gmplsTunnelErrorLastErrorType is protocol (2) the error should
>         be interpreted in the context of the signling protocol

  Nit: s/signling/signaling/


Section 8., paragraph 198:
>          The notification rate applies to the sum
>          of all notificaitons in the MPLS-TE-STD-MIB and

  Nit: s/notificaitons/notifications/


Section 9., paragraph 7:
>    if the network itself is secure (for example by using IPSec), even

  Nit: s/IPSec),/IPsec),/


Section 12.1., paragraph 22:
>    [GMPLSTCMIB] Nadeau, T. and A. Farrel, "Definitions of Textual
>                 Conventions for Multiprotocol Label Switching (MPLS)
>                 Management", draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-tc-mib, work in
>                 progress.

  Nit: 'GMPLSTCMIB' is defined on line 2850, but not referenced

(Bill Fenner; former steering group member) Yes

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(Brian Carpenter; former steering group member) No Objection

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(Cullen Jennings; former steering group member) No Objection

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(Dan Romascanu; former steering group member) (was Discuss) No Objection

No Objection (2006-08-30)
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COMMENT:

draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-lsr-mib-14.txt

     DESCRIPTION
       "Initial version issued as part of RFC XXX."
     ::= { mplsStdMIB XXX }
-- RFC Editor. Please replace XXX above with the correct RFC number and
-- remove this note.

-- RFC Editor. Please replace YYY above with the OID assigned by IANA
-- and remove this note


The intention is I believe:

     ::= { mplsStdMIB YYY }

Also:

     DESCRIPTION
       "Initial version issued as part of RFC XXX."
     ::= { mplsStdMIB XXX }
-- RFC Editor. Please replace XXX above with the correct RFC number and
-- remove this note.

-- RFC Editor. Please replace ZZZ above with the OID assigned by IANA
-- and remove this note

should rather be: 

    ::= { mplsStdMIB ZZZ }

in draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-tc-mib-10.txt

       -- This MIB module is contained in the OID sub-tree
       -- rooted at mplsStdMIB.
       "Initial version published as part of RFC XXX."
   ::= { mplsStdMIB XXX }

-- RFC Editor. Please replace XXX above with the correct RFC number and
-- remove this note.

-- RFC Editor. Please replace YYY above with the OID assigned by IANA
-- and remove this note

should be:

  ::= { mplsStdMIB YYY }

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(Russ Housley; former steering group member) (was Discuss) No Objection

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