High-Level Data Link Control (HDLC) Frames over Layer 2 Tunneling Protocol, Version 3 (L2TPv3)
RFC 4349

Note: This ballot was opened for revision 07 and is now closed.

(Margaret Cullen) Yes

(Brian Carpenter) No Objection

Comment (2005-08-18 for -** No value found for 'p.get_dochistory.rev' **)
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From Gen-ART review by Avri Doria

Section 3.1 page 5. It states that 

   LCCE A should then exhibit a periodic retry mechanism. The period
   and maximum number of retries MUST be configurable.

Since a MUST is used to define the period and number of retries, it
seems confusing that the retry mechanism is not also required.  If this
is conditional on such a mechanism exisiting, but the mechanism is
option (MAY), it should say this.

[BC - presumably the "should" in the first quoted sentence should be
"SHOULD" and the second sentence should start "If so, ...".
Alternatively, the "should" should be "MUST". ]

(Bill Fenner) No Objection

(Ted Hardie) No Objection

(Sam Hartman) No Objection

(Scott Hollenbeck) No Objection

(Russ Housley) (was Discuss) No Objection

Comment (2005-08-17)
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  Please pick one spelling:
    "Pseudowire" or "Pseudo-Wire"
    "HDLC PW" or "HDLCPW"

  In the 2nd paragraph of the Introduction:
    s/point to point/point-to-point/

  In section 3.1, the document says:
  >
  > Attribute Type 68, MUST be present in the ICRQ messages and MUST
  > include the HDLC PW Type of 0x0006 for HDLCPWs.
  >
  Please reword.  I suggest:
  >
  > Attribute Type 68 MUST be present in the ICRQ messages and MUST
  > include the PW Type of 0x0006 for HDLCPWs.

(David Kessens) No Objection

(Allison Mankin) (was Discuss) No Objection

Comment (2005-09-16)
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Said it needed an applicability statement (fidelity to the link) as per the PWE3 charter.  
This one is very good and straight-shooting, other than some sketchy
words about existence of mechanims to get the underlying link to have QoS like a
non-pseudo HDLC.

(Jon Peterson) No Objection

(Bert Wijnen) No Objection

(Alex Zinin) No Objection

(Mark Townsley) Recuse