Last Call Review of draft-wu-l3sm-rfc8049bis-05

Request Review of draft-wu-l3sm-rfc8049bis
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2017-10-11
Requested 2017-09-13
Authors Qin Wu, Stephane Litkowski, Luis Tomotaki, Kenichi Ogaki
Draft last updated 2017-10-12
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -07 by Lou Berger (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Carlos Martínez (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -07 by Jari Arkko (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Rifaat Shekh-Yusef (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -09 by Rifaat Shekh-Yusef (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Carlos Martínez
State Completed
Review review-wu-l3sm-rfc8049bis-05-opsdir-lc-martinez-2017-10-12
Reviewed rev. 05 (document currently at 11)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2017-10-12


I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

With the caveat that I'm not an expert, I've found this document to be READY.

I have found it well-written (those parts that require actual prose) and adequately referenced since it relies heavily on other documents.

Authors, please do remember to remove all non-final text before re-sending.