Last Call Review of draft-wilde-sunset-header-07
review-wilde-sunset-header-07-secdir-lc-salowey-2018-11-18-00

Request Review of draft-wilde-sunset-header
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2018-11-20
Requested 2018-10-23
Draft last updated 2018-11-18
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -07 by Jari Arkko (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Joseph Salowey (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -07 by Scott Bradner (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -08 by Joseph Salowey (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Joseph Salowey
State Completed
Review review-wilde-sunset-header-07-secdir-lc-salowey-2018-11-18
Reviewed rev. 07 (document currently at 11)
Review result Has Issues
Review completed: 2018-11-18

Review
review-wilde-sunset-header-07-secdir-lc-salowey-2018-11-18

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's 
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the 
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the 
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat 
these comments just like any other last call comments.

This document has some minor issues. 

Security considerations - in addition to Jari's comment of lifetime may be sensitive I have concerns about linked resource.  For example, the link may refer to another site which could compromise privacy or security if the link was followed.  The linked resource seems under-defined, which might lead to security issues if implementations make assumptions about the content of the link.