Last Call Review of draft-wallace-est-alt-challenge-04
review-wallace-est-alt-challenge-04-opsdir-lc-casarez-2016-02-28-00

Request Review of draft-wallace-est-alt-challenge
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2016-03-07
Requested 2016-02-13
Authors Max Pritikin, Carl Wallace
Draft last updated 2016-02-28
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -04 by Elwyn Davies (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -05 by Elwyn Davies (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Alexey Melnikov (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -04 by Rick Casarez (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Rick Casarez
State Completed
Review review-wallace-est-alt-challenge-04-opsdir-lc-casarez-2016-02-28
Reviewed rev. 04 (document currently at 08)
Review result Has Nits
Review completed: 2016-02-28

Review
review-wallace-est-alt-challenge-04-opsdir-lc-casarez-2016-02-28

Hello,

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

My overall view of the document is 'Ready with nits' for publication.

Editorial:

Section 1 - 1st paragraph / Section 3.1 OTP

There are no RFC references for OTP in these sections even though you had them for other sections. They are listed in Section 5 though. I recommend adding the same references in Section 5 to the two sections mentioning OTP (1/3.1).

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Cheers, Rick