Last Call Review of draft-stone-mgcp-vbd-
|Requested rev.||no specific revision (document currently at 10)|
|Type||Last Call Review|
|Team||Security Area Directorate (secdir)|
|Draft last updated||2010-06-24|
Secdir Last Call review of -?? by Carl Wallace
Secdir Telechat review of -?? by Carl Wallace
I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. This document defines new MGCP packages. This document is pretty far outside my sandbox, but I did have a couple of questions and comments. - Why is this an Informational document instead of Standards track? It seems to be defining new packages that are not already defined elsewhere. - I struggled with the presentation a bit and found myself reading references to understand some of the shorthand in this document. For example, in section 3.1 the column headers are not described in this draft. - The security considerations section is brief and primarily references RFC 3435, which essentially has two security considerations: use IPSec and use SDP encryption keys. The latter is not recommended in the current SDP draft. This section should directly state the security considerations it wants to assert.