Last Call Review of draft-shin-augmented-pake-
review-shin-augmented-pake-genart-lc-gurbani-2012-02-14-00

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Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2012-02-14
Requested 2012-01-19
Authors SeongHan Shin, Kazukuni Kobara
Draft last updated 2012-02-14
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -?? by Vijay Gurbani
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Document: draft-shin-augmented-pake-12
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: Feb-24-2012
IETF LC End Date: Not known
IESG Telechat date: March-15-2012

Summary: This draft is ready as an Experimental.

Some minor comments and nits follow.

Major issues: 0
Minor issues: 3
Nits/editorial comments: 2

Minor:

1. Section 1 (S1), first paragraph:
 s/session key would be used/session key is used/

2. S1, second paragraph: "...The AugPAKE protocol described in
 this document is an augmented PAKE which also achieves measurable
 efficiency over some previous works."

 For sake of completeness, it may help to provide references to
 the "previous works".

3. S1, second paragraph: "We believe the followings [SKI10]:" ---
 s/followings/following/
 but besides this, I am not sure what you are trying to say
 here.  Maybe a matter of expressing it in alternate English?

Nits:

1. S1, second paragraph: s/one and 1.17/1 and 1.17/
 This makes it congruent with "2 and 2.17" that appears a
 few lines above.

2. Email for author Kazukuni Kobara is missing.

Thanks,

- vijay
--
Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Alcatel-Lucent
1960 Lucent Lane, Rm. 9C-533, Naperville, Illinois 60563 (USA)
Email: vkg at {bell-labs.com,acm.org} / vijay.gurbani at alcatel-lucent.com
Web:   

http://ect.bell-labs.com/who/vkg/