Last Call Review of draft-pal-eidr-urn-2016-01

Request Review of draft-pal-eidr-urn-2016
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 03)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2016-07-01
Requested 2016-06-13
Authors Pierre-Anthony Lemieux
Draft last updated 2016-06-29
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -01 by Vijay Gurbani (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -01 by Vijay Gurbani (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -01 by Taylor Yu (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -01 by Mehmet Ersue (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Mehmet Ersue
State Completed
Review review-pal-eidr-urn-2016-01-opsdir-lc-ersue-2016-06-29
Reviewed rev. 01 (document currently at 03)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2016-06-29


I reviewed the document "Entertainment Identifier Registry (EIDR) URN Namespace Definition" (draft-pal-eidr-urn-2016-01.txt) as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the operational area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.


Intended status: Informational 

Obsoletes: 7302 (if approved) 

Current IESG state: In Last Call (ends 2016-07-01) 

IANA OK - Actions Needed


Summary: The document obsoletes RFC7302, which is on Entertainment Identifier Registry (EIDR) Identifiers used for the globally unique identification of motion picture and television content. The document defines the formal Uniform
Resource Name (URN) Namespace Identifier (NID) for EIDR Identifiers. The changes compared to RFC7302 are described in Annex A.2.


I don’t see any issue from operations and management pov.

However, following nit should be addressed:


  -- Looks like a reference, but probably isn't: '1' on line 375

=> There is indeed no reference defined as [1].