Telechat Review of draft-nottingham-rfc5988bis-07
review-nottingham-rfc5988bis-07-genart-telechat-bryant-2017-07-24-00
| Request | Review of | draft-nottingham-rfc5988bis |
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| Requested rev. | no specific revision (document currently at 08) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2017-08-01 | |
| Requested | 2017-07-18 | |
| Authors | Mark Nottingham | |
| Draft last updated | 2017-07-24 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -05 by Stewart Bryant
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Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Carlos MartÃnez (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Alan DeKok (diff) Genart Telechat review of -07 by Stewart Bryant (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Stewart Bryant |
| State | Completed | |
| Review | review-nottingham-rfc5988bis-07-genart-telechat-bryant-2017-07-24 | |
| Reviewed rev. | 07 (document currently at 08) | |
| Review result | Ready with Nits | |
| Review completed: | 2017-07-24 |
Review
review-nottingham-rfc5988bis-07-genart-telechat-bryant-2017-07-24
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-nottingham-rfc5988bis-07 Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review Date: 2017-07-24 IETF LC End Date: 2017-05-26 IESG Telechat date: 2017-08-03 Summary: Ready except for some confusing IANA text - please see below. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: I find the following text very confusing: IANA will direct any incoming requests regarding the registry to this document and, if defined, the processes established by the expert(s); typically, this will mean referring them to the registry Web page. Note that the expert(s) are allowed (as per Section 2.1.1.1) to define additional fields to be collected in the registry. You cannot direct a request to a document, and I am not sure you collect things in registry. It would be useful to take another look at the above text.