Last Call Review of draft-murchison-nntp-compress-05
review-murchison-nntp-compress-05-genart-lc-dupont-2016-09-26-00
| Request | Review of | draft-murchison-nntp-compress |
|---|---|---|
| Requested rev. | no specific revision (document currently at 06) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2016-10-10 | |
| Requested | 2016-09-15 | |
| Authors | Ken Murchison, Julien ÉLIE | |
| Draft last updated | 2016-09-26 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -05 by Francis Dupont
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Genart Telechat review of -06 by Francis Dupont Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Barry Leiba (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Francis Dupont |
| State | Completed | |
| Review | review-murchison-nntp-compress-05-genart-lc-dupont-2016-09-26 | |
| Reviewed rev. | 05 (document currently at 06) | |
| Review result | Ready | |
| Review completed: | 2016-09-26 |
Review
review-murchison-nntp-compress-05-genart-lc-dupont-2016-09-26
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-murchison-nntp-compress-05.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20160922 IETF LC End Date: 20161010 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - ToC page 2 and A page 21: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments - 2.2.1 page 5: e.g. -> e.g., - 3 page 11: e.g, -> e.g., - 7.1.1 page 15: I strongly suggest to not name the algorithm X, i.e., Subject: Registration of NNTP compression algorithm X -> Z - 7.1.2 page 16: if you can do that (or ask the RFC Editor): insert a line break before "(<ietf-" in place than between this and "nntp@...". - Authors' Addresses: I suggest to change US into USA. BTW if you prefer ISO IS 3166 2 letter codes you should change France into FR Regards Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr PS: about the not ASCII characters in Authors' Addresses, you can (should) ask the RFC Editor for guidelines (I know things are changing about this point but not what will be implemented before the publication of this document...)