Last Call Review of draft-leiba-rfc2119-update-01
review-leiba-rfc2119-update-01-genart-lc-sparks-2017-02-13-00

Request Review of draft-leiba-rfc2119-update
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 02)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-03-09
Requested 2017-02-09
Draft last updated 2017-02-13
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -01 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -01 by Joel Halpern (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -01 by Jürgen Schönwälder (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -01 by Donald Eastlake (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -02 by Robert Sparks
Assignment Reviewer Robert Sparks
State Completed
Review review-leiba-rfc2119-update-01-genart-lc-sparks-2017-02-13
Reviewed rev. 01 (document currently at 02)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2017-02-13

Review
review-leiba-rfc2119-update-01-genart-lc-sparks-2017-02-13

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Document: draft-leiba-rfc2119-update-01
Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review Date: 2017-02-13
IETF LC End Date: 2017-03-09
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Ready for publication as part of BCP 14.

I personally find the first bullet in the NEW section to be chatty, and think it could be reduced while strengthening the message, but enough eyes have been on this that I don't object to it going through as is.

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