Last Call Review of draft-kyzivat-case-sensitive-abnf-01
review-kyzivat-case-sensitive-abnf-01-genart-lc-carpenter-2014-09-06-00

Request Review of draft-kyzivat-case-sensitive-abnf
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 02)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2014-09-30
Requested 2014-09-04
Draft last updated 2014-09-06
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -01 by Brian Carpenter (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -02 by Brian Carpenter
Secdir Last Call review of -01 by Chris Lonvick (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -01 by Melinda Shore (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Brian Carpenter
State Completed
Review review-kyzivat-case-sensitive-abnf-01-genart-lc-carpenter-2014-09-06
Reviewed rev. 01 (document currently at 02)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2014-09-06

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Document: draft-kyzivat-case-sensitive-abnf-01.txt
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2014-09-06
IETF LC End Date: 2014-09-30
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Summary:   Ready with nits
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Comment:
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The writeup says this draft was discussed on the "abnf-discuss" list. When I looked,
the mail archive for abnf-discuss at ietf.org hadn't been updated since May 2012. Is there
some other list?

Nits:
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> Abstract
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>   This document extends the base definition of ABNF (Augmented Mackus-
>   Naur Form)

s/Mackus/Backus/

> 1. Introduction
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>   The base definition of ABNF (Augmented Mackus-Naur Form) supports
>   ASCII string literals.

s/Mackus/Backus/