Telechat Review of draft-kucherawy-marf-source-ports-
review-kucherawy-marf-source-ports-genart-telechat-black-2012-06-22-00

Request Review of draft-kucherawy-marf-source-ports
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 05)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2012-06-19
Requested 2012-06-07
Authors Richard Clayton, Murray Kucherawy
Draft last updated 2012-06-22
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -?? by David Black
Genart Telechat review of -?? by David Black
Secdir Last Call review of -?? by Joseph Salowey
Assignment Reviewer David Black
State Completed
Review review-kucherawy-marf-source-ports-genart-telechat-black-2012-06-22
Review completed: 2012-06-22

Review
review-kucherawy-marf-source-ports-genart-telechat-black-2012-06-22

The -04 version of this draft addresses the two nits noted in the Gen-ART
review of the -03 version of this draft.  It's ready for publication as a
Proposed Standard RFC.

Thanks,
--David


> -----Original Message-----
> From: Black, David
> Sent: Tuesday, May 15, 2012 2:12 PM
> To: richard.clayton at cl.cam.ac.uk; msk at cloudmark.com; gen-art at ietf.org
> Cc: Black, David; johnl at iecc.com; barryleiba at computer.org
> Subject: Gen-ART review of draft-kucherawy-marf-source-ports-03
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
> <

http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
> 
> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
> you may receive.
> 
> Document: draft-kucherawy-marf-source-ports-03
> Reviewer: David L. Black
> Review Date: May 15, 2012
> IETF LC End Date: June 4, 2012
> 
> This is a short draft that adds source ports to the Abuse Reporting Format for
> mail abuse reporting.
> 
> Summary:
> This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be
> fixed before publication.
> 
> Major issues: None.
> 
> Minor issues: None.
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> 
>   In section 3, please summarize what the "CFWS" ABNF element represents
> (comments and folding white space).
> 
>   Typo in last paragraph of section 3: "RECOMMENED" -> "RECOMMENDED"
> 
>   idnits 2.12.13 didn't find anything that requires attention.
> 
> Thanks,
> --David
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